Date: 2006-02-12 03:07 am (UTC)
Oh, wonderful start into what I'm sure will be a fantastic HAWT Jedi pron fic. Poor Obi-Wan, getting all worked up only to find out that his sexy "Flyboy" is really Anakin. *dopesmacks Obi-Wan*. It was deliciously ironic, knowing who Obi-Wan was lusting after, even though he himself did not yet know it. Bwahaha.

I remember the first time TM and I dared to type that 4-letter word. COCK *gasp!*. I am going to put my guess on la_genevoise... I dont know why, but that's just my guess. LOL.

And I'm currently downloading your soundtrack, lol. ^_^.

I have a question for you -- why did you decide to put the dialogue between dashes rather than quotation marks? It didn't detract from the story or anything, it just took me a moment to adjust to the different style.

I can't wait to read the update, especially when Anakin finds out who his shmexcellent pirate is!! And to see the Obi/Ani, the Obi/Qui, and the Ani/other!! Heck, I just can't wait to read anyhting more that you write!

Xtine
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